Nancy B. Hyslop
ERIC Clearinghouse on Reading and Communication
involved in the field of composition have sought continuously over the past two
decades to shape and refine discourse theory and develop more effective classroom
methods of evaluation. A careful look at these efforts suggests that the material
dealing with evaluating writing is not unlike the body of a hydra: we have one
theoretical body supporting two heads. Using one of the heads, we develop various
methods to critique or respond to students' written products (even as these products
represent a stage in the writing process); with the other head we devise ways
to measure or assess the quality of the written product according to some value
system. This digest will consider (1) the methods of response and (2) the measurement
of quality as represented by effective classroom teaching methods.
to student writing is probably the most challenging part of teaching writing.
It not only takes a tremendous amount of time and demands a great deal of intellectual
activity, it also affects to a large extent how students feel about their ability
to write. It becomes increasingly obvious that teachers may become less pressured
and more effective in dealing with response only as they are able to redefine
their role from that of an examiner who must spend enormous amounts of time grading
every paper to that of a facilitator who helps students recognize and work on
their own strengths and weaknesses (Grant-Davie, 1987).
time-saving techniques which reflect this philosophy were gathered from research
articles by Fuery and Standford and classified by Krest (1987). Peer revision,
peer editing, peer grading, computer programs, conferences, and a system of error
analysis are presented as effective measures which enhance individual development
as well as encourage more student writing.
that research has shown teacher comment has little effect on the quality of student
writing, Grant-Davie and Shapiro (1987) suggest teachers should view comments
as rhetorical acts, think about their purpose for writing them, and teach students
to become their own best readers. To achieve this goal, teachers should respond
to student drafts with fewer judgments and directives and more questions and suggestions.
Grant-Davie and Shapiro also outline the use of a workshop which utilizes peer
editing and revision.
Whitlock (1987) explains how Peter Elbow's concepts of "pointing," "summarizing,"
"telling," and "showing" can form the basis of an effective
method for training students to work in writing groups and give reader-based feedback
to peer writing.
to the "Standards for Basic Skills Writing Programs" developed by the
National Council of Teachers of English and reprinted in "National Standards:
Oral and Written Communications" (1984), when we measure the quality of students'
writing we should focus on before and after samplings of complete pieces of writing.
measure growth in the use of these conventions, an analytic scale analysis of
skills (Cooper and Odell, 1977) can be developed and used effectively with samples
of students' writing. This instrument describes briefly, in non-technical language,
what is considered to be high, mid, and low quality levels in the following areas:
(1) the student's ability to use words accurately and effectively; (2) the ability
to use standard English; (3) the ability to use appropriate punctuation; and (4)
the ability to spell correctly. Each of these skills is ranked for each paper
on a continuum from 1 (low) to 6 (high) (Hyslop, 1983).
addition to these instruments, various teacher/writers in the field share the
following strategies they have developed for measuring writing quality.
(1988) insists that informal observations and structured performance sample assessments
are more appropriate than standardized tests for measuring quality in early childhood
literacy learning. For example, when young children are asked to write and then
read what they write, the teacher can learn a great deal about their composing
strategies and about their strategies for encoding speech in written language.
Krest (1987) provides helpful techniques of a general nature to show teachers
how to give students credit for all their work and how to spend less time doing
it. These techniques involve using holistic scoring, using a somewhat similar
technique of general comments, and using the portfolio. Harmon (1988) suggests
that teachers should withhold measuring students' progress until a suitable period
of time has elapsed which allows for measurable growth, and then measure the quality
of selected pieces of writing at periodic intervals.
and Odell (1977) suggest that teachers can eliminate much of the uncertainty and
frustration of measuring the quality of these samples if they will identify limited
types of discourse and create exercises which stimulate writing in the appropriate
range but not beyond it. In their model, they present explanatory, persuasive,
and expressive extremes as represented by the angles of the triangle. Each point
is associated with a characteristic of language related to a goal of writing,
with assignments and the resulting measure of quality focused on that particular
teachers are moving increasingly toward this type of assessment of writing quality.
Hittleman (1988) offers the following four-part rating scale to be used after
the characteristic to be evaluated is established: (1) little or no presence of
the characteristic; (2) some presence of the characteristic; (3) fairly successful
communication...through detailed and consistent presence of characteristic; and
(4) highly inventive and mature presence of the characteristic.
(1987) presents an interesting modification of this process by measuring the quality
of students' papers with the following levels of concerns in mind: (HOCs) high
order concerns: focus, details, and organization; (MOCs) middle order concerns:
style and sentence order; and (LOCs) lower order concerns: mechanics and spelling.
of the 29 standards for assessment and evaluation in the NCTE report states that
control of the conventions of edited American English...spelling, handwriting,
punctuation, and grammatical usage...(should be) developed primarily during the
writing process and secondarily through related exercises.
in all, it appears that true growth in writing is a slow, seldom linear process.
Writing teachers have a wide variety of responses they can offer students before
making formal evaluations of the text (Harmon 1988).
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William H. "Developmentally Appropriate Assessment of Reading and Writing
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Roger. "Making Writing Groups Work: Modifying Elbow's Teacherless Writing
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This publication was prepared (Digest#50, EDO-CS-90-03, March 1990)
with funding from the U.S. Department of Education under contract number RI88062001,
and published by the ERIC Clearinghouse on Reading, English and Communication.
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